Hey Rob, overall I like it. The exaggerated proportions always work well with hulk characters. I think the legs and balance are the issues im seeing. His legs are a bit reversed. If his right arm is pulled back, then his right leg should be forward. I think it should still be planted tho. It'll create a more dynamic silhouette. I did a quick sketch illustrating what i mean. http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o167/tylerjart/redhulksketch-1.jpg Hopefully I'm being helpful. Either way, I regret nothing.
Thanks for the heads up. I will partly confess to running out of paper with the legs, but as for the pose, i -think- i have to disagree a bit, he's about to throw a punch, a la:
http://tinyurl.com/bffzuvl
or more realistically
http://tinyurl.com/b3ug4qj
Looking at these, his torso should twist more, maybe the the pose didnt read clear enough to convey the action.... Either way, I'll keep stuff like this in mind moving on.
Hey Rob, overall I like it. The exaggerated proportions always work well with hulk characters.
ReplyDeleteI think the legs and balance are the issues im seeing. His legs are a bit reversed. If his right arm is pulled back, then his right leg should be forward. I think it should still be planted tho. It'll create a more dynamic silhouette. I did a quick sketch illustrating what i mean.
http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o167/tylerjart/redhulksketch-1.jpg
Hopefully I'm being helpful. Either way, I regret nothing.
Thanks for the heads up. I will partly confess to running out of paper with the legs, but as for the pose, i -think- i have to disagree a bit, he's about to throw a punch, a la:
ReplyDeletehttp://tinyurl.com/bffzuvl
or more realistically
http://tinyurl.com/b3ug4qj
Looking at these, his torso should twist more, maybe the the pose didnt read clear enough to convey the action.... Either way, I'll keep stuff like this in mind moving on.
hm. ok. I think I see what you mean. I was imagining something different i suppose. Oh well.
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